“A full stop on an old-fashioned typewriter was a large black blob as
wide as a letter. When computers arrived they brought in typefaces with
proportional spacing and the full stop diminished to a small dot. For me, as a
former typewriter user, the effect was to make the full stop matter less. The
most crucial part of the sentence became a mere speck: easy to insert
unthinkingly, easy to miss out altogether.
“Then along came another threat - texting and chatting online. The
dialogic visual language of texting speech bubbles, pinging left and right on
your phone, has little use for full stops. A single-line text needs no
punctuation to show that it has ended. In lieu of a full stop, we press ‘send.’
The end of a text is now more commonly marked by a kiss, or an emoji, than a
full stop. Studies have even shown that people tend to read a text that ends
with a full stop as curt or passive-aggressive.
“We live in a digital age that likes to pretend that writing is speech.
We tap out emails, texts and update our social media profiles in the places –
busy commuter trains, cafes and streets – where we also talk. We write as if we
were talking. This kind of digital writing is often done quickly in the hope of
an instant response. It is a slightly interrupted way of having a conversation.
“But writing is not really conversation. One of the purposes of writing
effectively is to store and spread information in a form that does not require
anyone else’s bodily presence while it is being written. A piece of writing is
its own small island of sense, from which the writer has been airlifted and on
which no one else need live.
“So with any kind of formal or semi-formal writing we craft at work –
even an email – the full stop and where we put it are crucial. A sentence should
assume the reader’s existence but cannot, like a text speech bubble, keep
demanding a response. With a full stop, your sentence becomes self-supporting.
“The full stop offers the reader relief, allowing them to close the
circle of meaning and take a mental breath. Full stops also give writing its
rhythm. They come in different places, cutting off short and long groups of
words, varying the cadences – those drops in pitch at the sentence’s end which
signal that the sentence, and the sentiment, are done.
“A good sentence moves smoothly and cleanly towards a stop. The best way
to ensure this happens is to put the important stuff at the end. A sentence
ordered like this feels more deliberate and more memorable just as, when you
stop speaking, what sticks in your listener’s mind is the last thing you said.
A sentence’s strongest stress falls on its last stressed syllable, just before
the full stop. A sentence has a special snap if its last syllable is
stressed: I binned that brainless book. A sentence with a
strong end-stress says that its writer cared how its words fell on the reader’s
ear.
“If you want to write well, learn to love the full stop. See it as the
goal towards which the words in your sentence adamantly move. The full stop is
a satisfying little click that moves your writing along so the next sentence
can pick up where it left off” (The One Writing Skill You Must Master by John Moores).
--
Joe Moran is Professor of English at Liverpool John Moores University
and author of First You Write a Sentence: The Elements of Reading,
Writing … and Life.
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ReplyDelete"I enjoyed the perspective and the advice but admit to tending to write more conversationally. At the same time, though, I follow rules of punctuation, including the full stop he focuses on. I think the interim step from typewriter to texting, the word processor--essentially the computer--was important in adhering to norms of punctuation and grammar necause of the ability afforded to easily delete and rewrite. More thought went into expression, including the finishing of sentences with emphasis. Texting is too facile, built too much for speed, leading to the abbreviations (BTW, etc.) and emojis. That "instant response" mentioned is typical of our culture: instant gratification. Guess this is a reaction of an old-fashioned writer (happily guilty as charged). Also guess I'll remain digitally challenged!"- Richard Palzer
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