I am looking back at some of my favorite courses I had designed and taught throughout the years. Perhaps they will be helpful templates for a few current teachers. Here is the fourth one:
BENEDICTINE
UNIVERSITY
LITR
267, Studies in Poetry (2012 and 2016)
3 Credit Hours 8:00-9:15am Tuesday and Thursday
3 Credit Hours 8:00-9:15am Tuesday and Thursday
Instructor/Course Designer: Glen Brown
Office:
KN 270 Hours: Tuesday & Thursday
11:00-12:00 by appt.
REQUIRED TEXTS:
Collins,
Billy. Aimless Love. New York: Random House, 2013. ISBN
978-0-679-64405-7
Dunn,
Stephen. What Goes On, Selected and New Poems 1995-2009. New York: W.W.
Norton & Co., 2009. ISBN 978-0-393-33855-3
Mueller,
Lisel. Alive Together, New and Selected Poems. Baton Rouge: Louisiana
State University Press, 1996. ISBN 978-0-807-12128-3
Roberts,
Len. The Silent Singer, New and Selected Poems. Urbana/Chicago:
University of Illinois Press. 2001. ISBN 978-0-252-06952-9
52 Poets to Read and Discover: Click Here.
52 Poets to Read and Discover: Click Here.
COURSE DESCRIPTION:
LITR
267, Studies in Poetry, introduces students to the analysis of poetic texts and
forms and to the terminology and strategies essential to the interpretation of
poetry. Poems from various periods will
be analyzed for their formal qualities and in their cultural context. Students will practice strategies of reading,
including reading poetry aloud, and produce analytical interpretations
(literary explications) of poems studied.
ESSENTIAL STUDENT LEARNING GOALS
FOR THE LITERARY AND RHETORICAL MODE OF INQUIRY:
1. Critical Thinking and Problem
Solving
a.
Demonstrate critical thinking and analysis
2. Communication
a.
Express concepts and ideas clearly, creatively, and effectively in oral and
written forms
b.
Understand and interpret written, oral, visual, and aural forms of
communication
4. Global Perspective
c.
Understand the relationship between language and culture and communicate effectively
and respectfully across cultural boundaries
6. Personal Growth
a.
Develop intellectual curiosity and a desire for lifelong learning
7. Breadth of Knowledge and
Integrative learning
a.
Use knowledge, theories, and methods from the arts and humanities to raise and
address questions germane to these areas of study
STUDENT OUTCOMES:
Standard
I: Reading
Students will read a myriad of poems. They will
understand both the essential meaning of these poems and their deeper, more
inferential meaning.
1.1 Develop
an appreciation for “good” poetry
1.2 Understand
situation in a poem
1.3 Analyze
speaker in a poem
1.4 Understand
the psychological, social, political and/or historical values embodied in a
poem
1.5 Recognize
irony in a poem
1.6 Synthesize
plot, speaker, setting, and irony to interpret theme in a poem
1.7 Understand
the relationship among various literary elements (tone, diction, imagery,
symbolism, and various figurative language) and a poem’s content and theme
1.8 Understand
a poem and assess its relevance and rhetorical style in making an argument
Standard II: Writing
Students will write focused, insightful analyses of
poetry. They will be able to synthesize
research in a coherent, well-supported, argumentative essay. Their writing will be complex and
grammatically sound and revised.
2.1 Analyze
in-depth themes and the relationship of stylistic elements to theme
in poetry
in poetry
2.2 Develop a complex thesis
with insightfulness and clarity
2.3 Connect ideas logically
and clearly through a variety of sentence structures
2.4 Synthesize ideas
skillfully through effective organization and emphasis
of ideas
of ideas
2.5 Argue effectively through use of deductive and/or inductive
reasoning
2.6 Demonstrate increasing
grammatical, syntactical, and stylistic mastery
2.7 Develop and utilize an
effective vocabulary in writing and discussion
of poetry
of poetry
2.8 Demonstrate the use of
appropriate diction to establish and maintain tone
and voice
and voice
2.9 Analyze historical, cultural and social values to develop a
global view of poetry and context
2.10 Interpret poetry in relation to ethical, ideological, and
political systems
Standard III: Researching
Students
will gather, evaluate, and synthesize information from a variety of sources in
support of a given purpose: informative,
argumentative, etc.
4.1 Gather information from a
variety of reliable sources
4.2 Refine their search as
they progress
4.3 Develop sophisticated search
methods
4.4 Develop increasing
awareness of the varying degrees of quality
and authenticity in sources
and authenticity in sources
4.5 Analyze and synthesize
research
4.6 Integrate and document
research using MLA format
CLASSROOM ETIQUETTE: As we work together to create a
classroom environment that is both conducive to learning and welcoming of all
members of our class, students are expected to adhere to appropriate standards
of behavior for an academic environment. They include the following:
1) Act
collegially. Although you may disagree with the ideas expressed by a
classmate or the instructor, please express your disagreement civilly and
without animosity or sarcasm.
2) Please
do not talk or whisper while another member of the class, including the
instructor, is speaking.
3) Please
do not eat during class unless you have a medical condition that requires
it. Water, coffee, tea, or soft drinks are acceptable. (If you spill it,
you will clean it.)
4) Once
class has begun, you should exit or enter the room only in special
circumstances, and you should do so quickly and quietly so that you do not
disturb the rest of the class. If you know you must leave early due to an
unavoidable conflict, let the instructor know in advance when and why you will
be leaving early and, if possible, take a seat near the door. If you must
arrive late, let the instructor know in advance whenever possible.
Otherwise, speak with the instructor immediately after class. Three late
arrivals or early exits from class (more than 5 minutes) will count as one
unexcused absence.
5) You are expected to turn off your cell phone
before you enter class. If you use your
cell phone in any manner during class (e.g. text messaging, games, etc.) you
will be dismissed from class with an unexcused absence and forfeit any points
that you might have earned during class.
Furthermore, any electronic communication and/or data storage device is
prohibited during a test or quiz. You
will receive a zero for that assessment.
ATTENDANCE and PARTICIPATION: Because I
believe everyone has something to contribute to our class, I believe that we
are all responsible for attending college classes, which are public forums for
the exchange of varying beliefs, values and assumptions. A student’s education
is not an isolated and anti-social event. It is a reciprocation of mutual
interests and goals. Not everything valuable in a class can be assessed through
tests, quizzes and essays, or should be. However, I am not stressing attendance
over learning and education. On the contrary, I am emphasizing the values of
commitment and the responsibility to that obligation as part of a community of
teachers and learners.
We have in-class group discussions that are dependent upon the
contributions of each individual. In any class, a participating audience is
indispensable for its success. In this way, we are all participants in one
another’s education and opportunity for learning. Thus, partake fully in our
class discussions. Your ability to
articulate your opinions in each class may also determine the difference
between borderline grades. Participation in class is an essential requirement
for earning an “A” or “B!”
Remember if you come to class without your materials and/or reveal
that you did not read the assignment, you will be recorded absent. Please take responsibility for your education
and learning. It is a profound
opportunity and privilege that many people do not have, and it should never be
squandered. Attend our class! Your
presence and involvement are indispensable gifts that we will bring to one
another.
Please
note that more than three absences will affect your final grade.
Each subsequent absence will lower your final grade one full grade. If you are seriously ill and a contagion
(e.g. you have the flu) or have an emergency, please notify me by e-mail that you will be absent. It is imperative that you use your three
excused absences legitimately and wisely.
Finally, note that three late arrivals (more than five minutes) will
also equal one absence.
CONFERENCES: You are strongly encouraged to meet with me
during my office hours to discuss such concerns: help with the course material,
your writing, or questions and discussions raised in class.
TECHNOLOGY
REQUIREMENT: While laptops can be useful, they can also be a hindrance to
discussion. All students who bring
laptops, iPads, or smart phones to class should keep them closed unless using
something specifically related to discussion.
Eye contact is important to me!
Students should provide the email address they use most frequently, preferably the ben.edu address. St.
Martin’s, our recommended writing handbook
at BU, provides exercises on grammar. Online material is available at http://bcs.bedfordstmartins.com/exercisecentral/QuizHome.aspx?CourseId=8
or under Student Resources on the
Writing Program website. Basic word
processing skills are expected.
GRADING
GUIDELINES/RUBRIC:
The following descriptions are the basis for evaluation of all
student writing:
1. Content or ideas: their
significance, insightfulness, soundness, clarity, development, and relevance to
topic and purpose;
2. Organization: structure
or rhetorical methods used;
3. Personal style: voice
and tone, originality and interest;
4. Vocabulary and diction:
the choice and arrangement of words to convey meaning;
5. Mechanics: syntax,
punctuation, and spelling.
A
90-100% B 80-89% C 70-79% D 60-69% F -59%
The “A” literary
explications are simply outstanding. They are eloquent, sophisticated, insightful,
and emphatic in providing a convincing, arresting argument or reflection that
makes your point. The explications are fully supported by quotations and
paraphrases from the poems and other relevant critics and their claims. The
writing uses proper documentation of sources and contains only minor mechanical
errors, if any, and no significant lapses in diction or organization. The writing and oral discussions are
significant, interesting, informative, penetrating, lucid, and original.
The “B” literary
explications are very good. Like the “A” essays
and oral discussions, these analyses are also focused, supported, effective,
and consistently written and tightly organized.
The writing uses proper documentation of sources and contains no major
distracting errors in usage or mechanics. The writing is well developed with
good supporting material and transitions.
The writing and discussions are also clear, free of jargon, and appealing.
The “C” literary
explications are acceptable, but they are
average responses that complete the assignment in a “routine” way. In other words, they show limited evidence of
engagement with the topic and make a minimum response to it. [Procrastination is evident]. The writing
uses proper documentation of sources and contains few distracting errors and
few glaring platitudes or egregious mistakes in diction. The reader/listener can follow and understand
without difficulty, but the writing and discussions are not well supported and
vigorous, nor are the ideas original and inspiring.
The “D” literary
explications relate to the assignment but show
no evidence of any engagement.
[Procrastination is also evident]. The writing is marred by enough
errors in syntax and mechanics to seriously distract the reader and by vague,
ambiguous diction and syntax that make it difficult to understand the content
or the direction of the argument. This
reflection may also be a weak because it does not complete the required length
or fulfill the requirements of the assignment.
The “F” literary
explications show little relation to or
engagement with the topic. They show
very little thought and are so poorly constructed and carelessly written that
the reader/listener cannot follow the sequence of ideas. Moreover, the explications are marred by so
many errors in mechanics and usage that the message is extremely difficult to
decipher. It is evident that these reflections
do not complete the required length or fulfill the requirements of the assigned
topic. A plagiarized paper (see below),
in part or whole, receives an “F” or “0” points.
COURSE REQUIREMENTS & DISTRIBUTION OF EARNED POINTS:
Two Practice Literary Explications (50 pts. Each) 100
In-Class Mid-term Literary Explication 100
Two (3-4 page) Literary Explications (150 pts. each) 300
Final Literary Explication on a Poet (4-6 page) Essay 200
700
Students are expected to be partners in their educational
experience and to periodically monitor their progress in the course.
Students may check grade status through D2L course site Gradebook.
LATE PAPERS/ONLINE RESPONSES WILL
NOT BE ACCEPTED.
ACADEMIC
HONESTY: The search for truth and
the dissemination of knowledge are the central missions of a university. Benedictine University pursues these missions
in an environment guided by the Roman Catholic tradition and Benedictine
heritage. Integrity and honesty are,
therefore, expected of all members of the University community, including
students, faculty members, administration, and staff. Actions such as cheating, plagiarism,
collusion, fabrication, forgery, falsification, destruction, multiple submission,
solicitation, and misrepresentation are violations of these expectations and
constitute unacceptable behavior in the University community. The penalties for such actions can range from
a private verbal warning to expulsion from the University. Violations will be reported to the Provost,
and a permanent record of this infraction will be noted. The
University’s Academic Honesty Policy is available at http:/www.ben.edu/AHP; all
students are expected to read and understand it.
PLAGIARISM
is defined as the act
of stealing ideas and/or the expressions from another person or source and
representing them as your own work. This
includes quotations, paraphrasing, and the summarizing of another person’s
ideas without proper documentation.
Furthermore, unless you have the explicit permission of the instructor, reusing your own work from other courses is
considered self-plagiarism.
Plagiarism is a form of cheating and academic misconduct that can
jeopardize your course grade and college career. Remember to clearly distinguish between your
own ideas and those you have read or heard elsewhere. Be sure to include a works cited page with
any paper in which you consult outside sources.
All written and typed assignments
submitted for evaluation will be graded with the assumption that the student
has read and understands the plagiarism statements and guidelines. Committing
plagiarism will result in a
grade of “0” on the assignment in question and is grounds for failure of the
course or further action by the University.
If there are any questions or concerns regarding plagiarism and the
documentation of sources, it is your responsibility to consult the
instructor. It is required that your two formal literary explications and final
literary explication on a poet be submitted to D2L plagiarism software (Dropbox
in D2L).
WRITING
ZONE: Besides your peers who help students in the Writing Zone, the
Student Success Center offers tutorial services in writing. For further information, please visit the
Student Success Center in Krasa Center, Room 012.
AMERICANS
WITH DISABILITIES ACT (ADA): If you have a documented
learning, psychological or physical disability, you may be eligible for
reasonable academic accommodations or services.
To request accommodations or services, please contact the Student
Success Center, Krasa Center 012 at 630-829-6512.
Nonetheless, all students are expected to fulfill essential course
requirements. The University will not
waive any essential skill or requirement of a course or degree program.
ACADEMIC
ACCOMMMODATIONS FOR RELIGIOUS OBLIGATIONS (AAFRO): A
student whose religious obligation conflicts with a course requirement may
request an academic accommodation from the instructor. Students must make such requests in writing
by the end of the first week of class.
The student is responsible for the information in this syllabus
and should ask for clarification for anything in this syllabus of which he or
she is unsure.
DIRECTIONS
FOR WRITING A LITERARY EXPLICATION OF A POEM:
Explication is a method of literary criticism involving a close
and systematic examination of specific elements in a work. The goal of explication is to explain to a
reader the deeper relationships and meanings of each individual part of a poem
and, subsequently, of the poem as a whole.
Your purpose in writing an essay of literary criticism is (1) to
explain to a reader what you have discovered in a critical reading of a
particular poem and (2) to interpret the meaning of the poem by subjecting its
techniques to explication.
To write effectively about a poem, you must first answer a few
basic questions: what happens and to whom?
What is the subject of the poem, that is, what do you discover when you
delve beneath the surface and bring to light the deeper concerns of the poem? And what is the theme of the poem, that is,
the abstract concept the poet is attempting to make clear in his or her poem (or
what the poet has to say about the true subject).
Your second step is to understand how the poet says something
about the human condition through a particular technique, such as tone, diction,
imagery, metaphor, point of view, symbolism, allusion, personification, irony,
metrical pattern and/or structure, etc. (When you explicate a passage through
an examination of some particular technique employed by the poet, you select a
stanza that demonstrates, for example, imagery, metaphor, tone, diction, etc.
and lead the reader into a deeper level of meaning in the poem).
Once you understand the subject and theme and how the poet reveals
and emphasizes his or her theme through 2 or 3 poetic techniques, you then
synthesize steps one and two and discover the meaning of the work. In short, when writing about a poem, you
first paraphrase the narrative to reveal the subject of the work; second, you
analyze the techniques the writer uses to present his or her insights,
experiences, philosophical points or observations about life and, last,
synthesize the first two steps to deduce the meaning of the work: your purpose
is to reveal the theme or the experience that broadens and expands your
understanding of life or the meaning of what happens. To arrive at a theme, for example, ask what
does the work finally say about life?
What is its overall view of human existence?
WRITING
YOUR LITERARY EXPLICATIONS:
When writing your essay (1) find and narrow the subject: select
two or three techniques from the many that may be present in the poem, then
select specific examples of each technique and prove how it reveals the theme;
(2) determine your purpose and thesis; (3) consider your audience (our class);
(4) gather and make preliminary notes; (5) organize the essay into a unified
and coherent body, introduction, and conclusion; (6) develop the essay – never
make a statement without explaining it – a well-developed essay consists of a
detailed discussion of one specific area or observation about a work of
literature. Concentrate on an effective
beginning and an effective conclusion; (7) prepare a finished draft and make
the final revisions. Cite all outside
sources! Do not procrastinate!
When organizing the literary explication, the opening lines should
contain background information calculated to capture the reader’s interest and
aid his or her understanding. You need
to state a thesis: a brief statement in which you define as concisely as
possible what you want to say about the poem.
The body of the essay must explain and amplify your interpretation and
thesis. The conclusion summarizes the
vision you can bring to your interpretation or main statement. In your conclusion, you can summarize the
basic points of your essay and restate your thesis in another way, or you can
make your final and most important point.
The latter is usually preferable.
The keys to achieving full development of purpose lie in a sound
and logical outline of your main ideas (your thesis and topic sentences) and in
complete explanation and proof of each of these ideas. Each major subordinate idea or point that
supports your thesis becomes a paragraph in your essay, and each paragraph
consists of an essay in miniature. A
paragraph in the body of an essay usually opens with a topic sentence. Following the topic sentence, you will need
to offer a series of supporting remarks, which amplify and make clear your
topic sentence.
In addition, you will often need to provide your reader with
appropriate quotations from the work of literature you are discussing or lines
from the poem. Explanations and
quotations will make up the bulk of the content of your literary explication. Both are often thought of as your proof and
without adequate proof, your essay will not be convincing.
FINAL
ESSAY ON A SELECTED POET:
This research essay involves a poet who is essential and relevant
to our class. Choose any poet named in this syllabus. Your essay is in two sections:
- This poet’s life and works: your biographical research should focus on events that influenced his or her creative vision and style. Include key events in this poet’s life as you capture the uniqueness of his or her values, beliefs, assumptions, and influences that helped shape his or her thinking and creativity. Note: the majority of the material in this section requires an ample citing of sources.
- An explication of your favorite poem by this poet; thus, follow the directions for literary explications.
The essay is four-six pages in length,
typed and double-spaced. When you have decided on a poet,
please tell me so there are no duplications.
POETRY
VOCABULARY TO LEARN (I
will provide their definitions for you):
Diction --Denotation –Connotation –Imagery –Simile –Metaphor –
Conceit –Personification –Apostrophe --Metonymy –Synecdoche --Symbolism
–Allegory –Paradox –Hyperbole (Overstatement) --Understatement –Irony (Verbal,
Dramatic, Situation) –Allusion –Tone --Alliteration –Assonance --Consonance
–Cacophony --Feminine rhyme --Masculine rhyme --Internal rhyme --End rhyme
--Approximate rhyme --Refrain --Rhythm --Meter --Stanza --Scansion --Free verse
--End-stopped line –Run-on line --Blank verse --Onomatopoeia --Phonetic
intensives --Continuous form --Stanzaic form --Fixed form --Limerick
–Petrarchan or Italian Sonnet –Villanelle --Octave --Sestet --Shakespearean
sonnet –Quatrain – Prose Poem --Haiku –Sentimental poetry --Rhetorical poetry
--Didactic poetry --Point of view --Persona --Setting –Syntax –Chiasmus
--Oxymoron –Anaphora –Asyndeton –Caesura –Pentameter –Spondee –Iambic –Dactylic
–Couplet
COURSE
OUTLINE Literature 267 Studies
in Poetry
This
schedule may be subject to changes by your instructor, which will be announced
in class.
Please bring the required books, materials, and assignments to class as
designated, unless otherwise instructed. All assigned materials should be read
by each date. Each week, I will provide
you with copies of the poems prior to the assignment due dates. Please bring
these copies of the poems to class as assigned.
Jan.
19: Welcome to Literature 267,
Studies in Poetry; “Those Winter Sundays” by Robert Hayden; “Lines for Winter”
by Mark Strand, “Poetry Reading” by John Dickson, “poetry readings” by Charles
Bukowski, “Poem for Magic [Johnson]” by Quincy Troupe.
Jan.
21: “Argos” by Michael Collier,
“An Individual History” by Michael Collier, “Drill” by Michael Collier, “Careers”
by Stephen Dobyns, “Long Story” by Stephen Dobyns, “Loud Music” by Stephen
Dobyns, “The Muses of Rooms” by Vern Rutsala.
Jan.
26: “Cages” by James Frazee, “Birds
of God” by Jack Hayes, “Scars” by Peter Meinke, “Testimony” by Corrine Hales,
“Snake” by D.H. Lawrence, “The Lost Originals” by W.S. Merwin, “Traveling
through the dark” by William Stafford.
Jan.
28: “Liberty” by Paul Éluard, “Fugue”
by John Dickson, “Hatred” by Wislawa Szymborska, “What I Can Tell You” by
Gregory Djanikian, “The Aestheticians of Genocide” by Gregory Djanikian, “To a
Terrorist” by Stephen Dunn.
Feb.
2: A Poetry Workshop for
Practice with Literary Explications: “Blackberry Picking” by Seamus Heaney and
“For the Union Dead” by Robert Lowell.
Feb.
4: “Dulce et Decorum est” by
Wilfred Owen, “Arms and the Boy” by Wilfred Owen, “Anthem for Doomed Youth” by
Wilfred Owen, “Sonnet” by Wilfred Owen, “The Next War” by Wilfred Owen, “Song
of Napalm” by Bruce Weigl, “The Last Lie” by Bruce Weigl, “What Saves Us” by
Bruce Weigl.
Feb.
9: “Underwear” by Lawrence
Ferlinghetti, “America” by Tony Hoagland,
“Operations” by Tony Hoagland, “Why the Young Men Are so Ugly” by Tony
Hoagland, “What Narcissism Means to Me” by Tony Hoagland, “Zimmer's Head
Thudding against the Blackboard” by Paul Zimmer, “Things My Grandfather Must
Have Said” by Mark Cox.
A Practice Literary Explication is due.
Feb.
11: A Poetry Workshop for
Practice with Literary Explications: “Dover Beach” by Matthew Arnold and “Ode
on a Grecian Urn” by John Keats.
Feb.
16: “Confession” by John
Dickson, “Erasing the Taste of Love…” by John Dickson, “Case History” by John
Dickson, “Poemectomy” by John Dickson,
“The Pines” by John Dickson, “Suicide Pact” by John Dickson, “The Girl
on the Hill” by John Dickson, “The Ravenswood 'L'” by John Dickson.
Feb.
18: “Body and Soul” by B.H.
Fairchild, “Center Field” by Richard Jackson, “Sign for My Father, Who Stressed
the Bunt” by David Bottoms, “How I Learned English” by Gregory Djanikian, “When
I First Saw Snow” by Gregory Djanikian, “The Bad Boys of Junior High” by
Gregory Djanikian.
A Practice Literary Explication is due.
Feb.
23: “A Space in the Air” by
Jon Silkin, “Death of a Son” by Jon Silkin, “Meadow Mouse” by Theodore Roethke,
“May” by Bruce Weigl, “Dog” by Jeff Stockwell, “Grimalkin” by Thomas Lynch,
“Nelle Isle, 1949” by Philip Levine, The Price in the Eyes by Fred Voss.
Feb.
25: “Sonnet 73” by William
Shakespeare, “A Valediction: Forbidding Mourning” by John Donne, “To His Coy Mistress” by Andrew
Marvell, “To the Virgins to Make Much of Time” by Robert Herrick, “Ozymandias”
by Percy Shelley, “Do Not Go Gentle into That Good Night” by Dylan Thomas.
Mar.
1, 3, & 8 Dunn,
Stephen. What Goes On, Selected and
New Poems 1995-2009. In addition to the book: “Don't Do That,” “Archaeology,” “Elsewhere,”
“A Postmortem Guide,” “Beautiful Women,” “On the Way to Work,” “Sweetness,” “The
Sudden Light and the Trees,” and “Tiger Face” by Stephen Dunn.
Mar.
10: Mid-Term In-Class Exam
Mar.
15, 17, & 29: Collins,
Billy. Aimless Love. In
addition to the book: “Days,”
“Forgetfulness,” “Marginalia,” “Schoolsville,” “Shoveling Snow with Buddha,”
“The Death of Allegory,” “The End of the World,” “Victoria's Secret,” and “Winter
Syntax” by Billy Collins.
Mar. 31: Workshop
for Literary Explication #1 (Bring 2 copies of your “almost” final
draft)
Apr.
5, 7 & 12: Mueller,
Lisel. Alive Together, New and
Selected Poems
Your Final Literary Explication #1 is due on Apr. 7th.
Apr.
14: Workshop for Literary Explication #2
(Bring 2 copies of your “almost” final draft). You should have selected your
poet for your final essay.
Apr. 19, 21 & 26: Roberts, Len. The Silent Singer, New and Selected Poems.
In addition to the book:
“My Mother Catalogues the Wrongs,” “The Disappearing Trick,” “Father,”
“I Can't Forget You,” “Stealing,” and “The Block” by Len Roberts. Your Final
Literary Explication #2 is due on
Apr. 21.
Apr.
28: “Eggs”
by Susan Wood, “An Early Afterlife” by Linda Pastan, “Daddy” by Sylvia Plath,
“Lady Lazarus” by Sylvia Plath, “Mirror” by Sylvia Plath, “Burn Center” by
Sharon Olds, “The Guild” by Sharon Olds.
May 3: Lyrical
Poetry.
May
5: Poetry
Reading (You are bringing your two
favorite poems to read to class) Your Final Essay on a Poet is due.
May 9-13 Final
Exams Week: For this class, Carpe Diem et Carmina!
RELEVANT
QUESTIONS ABOUT POETRY:
Your goal in reading a poem is to work towards understanding a
theme: to know the difference between what a poem states and what the poem
means. Poetic elements you choose to
address must create and convey what you think the poem means. These
questions may apply to any poem
- Who
is the speaker in the poem?
- Is
there an identifiable audience?
- What
is the occasion? What might be the
poet’s purpose for writing this poem?
- What
is the setting?
- What
is the tone and mood of the poem and how are they achieved?
- Is
there a structure or pattern to the poem? Shakespearean or Petrarchan
sonnet? Villanelle? Are the lines iambic, trochaic, dactylic,
anapestic? Is there a metrical
pattern that serves or reinforces meaning?
Any shifts in pattern and emphasis?
- Are
there any examples of metaphor, simile, personification, chiasmus,
onomatopoeia, oxymoron, synecdoche, metonymy, etc.?
- Are
there any examples of paradox, overstatement, understatement (litotes),
and irony?
- Is
there a shift in point of view or shift in emphasis in the poem?
- Are
there any allusions?
- In
discussing diction and style, ask why this poet chose these words? Any connotations, anaphora, asyndeton,
caesura, etc.?
- In
discussing syntax, does the poet use periodic or loose sentences? Parallel
structure? Rhetorical questions?
- Is
the poem allegorical? Are there any symbols?
- Are
there examples of alliteration, assonance, consonance, and repetition?
- What kinds of imagery are used? Is there a pattern?
GENERAL
TIPS FOR READING AND ANALYZING POETRY:
Poetry requires very close reading, for nearly every word serves a
specific purpose. The following are some
tips for actively reading and analyzing poetry:
- Define and analyze every word of the TITLE; pay attention not only to literal meaning but also to CONNOTATIVE MEANINGS as well.
- Define all UNFAMILIAR WORDS within the poem, making note of words that could have MULTIPLE MEANINGS.
- Place
brackets around PUNS
(play on words), HOMONYMS
(words that sound the same but have different spelling and meaning), IMAGES, and SYMBOLS. In the margin,
write a few words that explain the
meaning of different images and symbols.
- Circle every PRONOUN and write its noun above it. Correct the order of SENTENCE INVERSIONS and paraphrase the lines.
- Write down the theme of the poem. Underline THEME STATEMENTS within the poem. Draw a circle around CHANGES IN ORGANIZATION of the poem. Explain how the organization might be important to that theme.
- At the bottom of the poem, write a summary of the LITERAL LEVEL of the poem’s meaning (what the text actually says). Re-phrase the poem in “plain-talk” English. Write down some thoughts that move BEYOND THE LITERAL LEVEL: what is implied or hidden.
- Try to figure out what SITUATION the person who is narrating the poem is in. (Imagine the external circumstances or the internal state of mind that you would have to be in before you wrote this poem).
- Offer a reasonable interpretation: that INTERPRETATION is best which is SIMPLEST, yet takes into account all the material in the poem. Show the reader the path your mind took from the lines of the poem to the conclusions you reached in your interpretation. In other words, explain fully enough how your mind moved from what you claim the poem says to what you claim the poem means. Every conclusion you make in your interpretation must be SUPPORTABLE and SUPPORTED by passages from the poem itself.
Keeping a Net Beneath Them by Glen Brown
ReplyDelete“Teaching is the greatest act of optimism.”
—Colleen Wilcox
I open the book and pump three poems
into their heads, push a paper ladder
against their brains and beg them
to climb out of their mind-set
of common connectivity and fantasy.
But I discover their fear of heights and,
of course, I compete with Facebook,
Twitter, and some strawberry blonde
in a Saran Wrap costume snorkeling for attention.
Once I drowned in the undertow of mini-skirts,
bell-bottom trousers, and long hair row after row.
So maybe it makes no difference
what they think or do or wear in school today,
or whether they “squeeze the universe into a ball
to roll it toward some overwhelming question,”
or love “a red wheelbarrow glazed with rainwater
beside the white chickens.”
These are the Millennials: the Net Generation
that plumbs the meaning of life without sweetness
and through Wi-Fi networks and iPhones,
and what they learn now surges from a flux
of wireless LAN, Bluetooth and YouTube.
Perhaps they’ll find out later
“all they need to know [about] truth [and] beauty”—
for now, they’re just riptides
to their short-circuited obsessions.
Even so, I can’t help but love their vertigo
when the heavy tug of ignorance lifts slowly
from their faces against the sinking of gravity,
just after they embark on that first rung
of understanding and ascend
with no sense of balance.